The line - "toss your mortar board somewhere over the rainbow" - is beautiful. That'll stay with me all weekend.
I like it!The first line would be stronger without the comma after "delicate". I would also make "with nails of clear, clear polish" its own lineI, too, am enchanted by the "toss your mortar board somewhere over the rainbow"--it's very effective!
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The line - "toss your mortar board somewhere over the rainbow" - is beautiful. That'll stay with me all weekend.
I like it!
The first line would be stronger without the comma after "delicate". I would also make "with nails of clear, clear polish" its own line
I, too, am enchanted by the "toss your mortar board somewhere over the rainbow"--it's very effective!
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